Hello，大家好，这里是江山国际教育极智优选留学考试中心学院派和猥琐派结合的Jammy老师,以后有计划经常在线上给大家撩撩英语写作的博大精深，分享翻译背后的唯美如画。
感谢那些年帮助过我的人（感激：appreciate;be/feel grateful/thankful for; be indebted to;express/extend gratitude to）因为感激之情如——赠人玫瑰，手有余香：
When we give roses to others，their frgrance will linger in our hands.感谢那些年指出我错误的人（批评：criticize- Your criticisim
ushered in a thorough understanding of my weaknesses.）因为批评之词是——良药苦口利于病，忠言逆耳利于行：Bitter medicine cures diseases; unpalatable advice benefits conduct.
英语写作常见“七宗罪”——Seven Sins in English Writing
1. 用词不当原：The absence of groupwork is a disaster for teenagers in modern society.注：我们在写作中表团队活动不用groupwork
，因它是“分组，小组集体作业”的意思改：teamwork高分句型：The absence/lack of sth is a disaster/catastrophe for sb……某某的却是竟然是灾难，这里使用了夸张（。
Hyperbole）的修辞手法：
夸张是以言过其实的说法表达强调的目的.它可以加强语势,增加表达效果.. 例如:1.I beg a thousand pardons.2.Love you. You are the whole world to me
, and the moon and the stars.3.When she heard the bad news,a river of tearspoured out.2. 搭配错误
原：Nowadays,people are crazy pursuingto be excellent.注：我们不用be crazy doing sth，这里缺少介词about改：be crazy about doing sth.。
Pursue: v.追求，追逐pursuit :n. The pursuit of happiness/knowledge/profitExcellent- excellency-excel in/at sth: She has always excelled in foreign languages.
江山国际教育，助力最优秀的你：WE MAKE YOU EXCEL.3.词性错位
原：Although makingmoneyis a priority for most people, spending time with the family is equal significant.
注：副词修饰形容词或者动词同样地重要的改：equally附：高分句型——Sth. is a priority for sb.Equal做形容词经常用be equal to4. 时态混乱
原：Although I have nowork experience when I was a teenager, I always dreamed about having a job.注：很多同学不注意写作或者口语中的时态，而这却是评分老师的一眼能看出的错误。
改：had （dream of doing sth./dream about doing sth.)5. 主谓不一致
原：The way we deal with the environmental problems are crucial to the prosperity of human-being.注：important-significant/crucial/vital/essential/indispensable/pivotal
改：are——is6. 重复累赘
原：From my point of view, I think this argument is quite limited since many other ways can also help to learn a foreign country.
注：隐性重复是中国学生最容易犯的错误，大家还记得那年大明河畔高考语文要修改的病句吗？改：去掉From my pointof view或I think7. 中式英语
原：Thus, one is easier to draw bosses’ attention and gain appreciation.注：大街小巷各种中式英语的翻译，让人啼笑皆非人还有容易不容易之分吗？上图的两句中文怎么翻译呢？知道正确翻译的同学Jammy有重磅奖励哟。
改： it is easier for one to......附：寻求注意力，引起注意seek/draw attention这家公司独特的宣传和推广活动使它最终在交易会上出尽了风头The unique publicity and promotion eventually helped the company seek more than enough attention from the public at the trade fair.。
看了这写作翻译七宗罪，是不是发现自己经常犯这样或那样的错误，昨日种种譬如昨日死，今日种种譬如近日生，后悔无用，改正错误，努力前行，一切美好都是值得等待的。
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